In my holidays i went to a wedding it was held at Five knots in Mission bay. It was very beautiful it was a Samoan wedding it was so amazing to be a wedding that was the first wedding I have ever been to. I was amazed about how they prepared everything. My favourite part was when the bridesmaids,grooms,bride,groom as they walked out they a man was sing them out the song was called Falling in love with jesus.
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Hi Jozlo,
I thought your writing about the wedding was very interesting, especially because it was your first time. I think you should go back and re-read some sentences, some don’t make sense. Other than that, I thought your writing was good.
Good Job!
Aaliyah
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